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[Beaten Up]

It was...... ok for a first

What I see as the problem for First time animators that are doing the whole stick figure kick ass thing is this:

1. As in Yours you are using the line tool correct? The problem is the line thickness is set at 1 which makes the stick figures look a little crappy. If you look at the bottom somewhere it has the ability to change the thickness thus makes your stick figure look better.

2. It was very choppy. You NEED to make the moves look more natural and smooth so be careful not to move to much at a time.

3 . Last is this. You nee to use... Better sounds that scream sound is used waaaay to often with a lot of movies. And also the Punch sound was the same for everything that hit.

So do that, look up tutorials for animating, an take a little time on the background i am sure you will make a decent stcik fiure flash.

[So... Brawl was delayed..]

I know what you mean

At first i hear About it & i was Really pissed off, But I am now sure to get it because It releases on my B-day!!!
Aren't I a lucky bastard?
Oh and the You-tube thing, its waaaaaay better then having it stolen on E-baums world, At least people know half the stuff on youtube is stolen.

[BACON!!!!!!]

Now I am all hungry

I hate you >=O, Nice clock day spam flash

[Claydays: WARPED!]

Very Good!!

I liked the it very much it was great & not choppy as most clay animations out there. It was seet & i loved the randomness of it all. Although you draged it out in some parts (i have to complain about something or it would be a review) but overall it was great. I know most people hate questions like this but i want to do stop motion in the near future (once i find my webcam) and i was wondering what program you used for stop motion. now I got to stop all this writing is hurting my head.

Lino responds:

I use Stop Motion Pro for all my animations. :D

[The PS3 Song!]

Wow, great

GRRRRR I H8 You PS3 Pwned you all!!!
haha just kidding
Great flash although repetitive scenes get a little annoying..
but overall great great job one thing thing though
I liked the song But you didnt include all of it i though it would be funny drawing him up there going ummmm uhhhhh...
But really this shows some reasons why Sony Went downwards after the release of the Ps3
I liked it & I love the 360 so i give an 8/10